有文化的四个标准(有文化的四个标准视频)

老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，审题

3，高分范文

4，范文朗读

5，范文解析，包括：

• 题目改述
• 讨论 观点类大作文高分句型
• 展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
• 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型

上题：

Some people believe that a person’s culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

审题：

• Type: Discuss & Opinion 讨论 观点 (我的观点：major influence)
• Body 1: little influence, as new cultural norms are adapted too
• Body 2: cultural core of mother country, extremely difficult to adapt to fully assimilate
• Key words: defined有文化 by/minor influence

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

▲范文音频戳这里▲

There are those who think that an inpidual’s birth country dictates that person’s personal culture; whereas, others feel it has little consequ标准ence. This essay shall explore both viewpoints; however, in my opinion, I believe one’s mother country plays an integral role in forming one’s cultural personality.

One of the main reasons why some believe one’s country of birth, for those that have emigrated, plays a minimal role in that person’s cultural identity is because it is felt that the adoptive culture exudes a powerful presence in the migrant’s life. This presence manifests itself through the daily interactions the immigrant encounters, through the protocols of behavior the person adopts, and even through the language. Eventually, after a period of adaptation, the person will become assimilated into the new country in which the migrant resides, and particularly if that person takes on the citizenship of 视频that country, will become culturally similar with those born in that country.

On the other hand, even in countries that have robust ‘melting pot’ policies, such as the United States, acting as a magnet for people from all over the 的world, the immigrant may find it extremely difficult to re-socialize themselves by taking on the cultural norms of their newly adopted country. Though the second generation born into their parent’s adoptive country may assimilate easily, the parents, no matter how long they may have lived in the country of their naturalization, will tend to be largely influenced by the culture of their origin. This cultural residue from the original culture may diminish over time, nevertheless, the person’s cultural core will most likely remain unchanged.

In conclusion, despite that the act of naturalizing into a new country may, over time, increasingly acculturate an immigrant, it seems clear to me that the cultural heart of a person inherited from their country of origin will remain significant, defining that person’s cultural personality long after they have adopted a new country of residence.

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- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

- (1) Introduction

There are those who think that an inpidual’s birth country dictates that person’s personal culture; whereas, others feel it has little consequence. This essay shall explore both viewpoints; however, in my opinion, I believe one’s mother country plays an integral role in forming one’s cultural personality.

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改述:

• Some people believe that = There are those who think that
• a person’s = an inpidual’s
• is defined by = dictates
• country of origin = birth country
• , while others believe = ; whereas, others feel
• that = it
• a minor influence = little consequence

Standard Phrase for the “Discuss Opinion” type essay “讨论 观点类“大作文高分句型：

• There are those who think that
• ; whereas, others feel it
• This essay shall explore both viewpoints; however, in my opinion, I believe…

Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:

• There
• those
• who
• that
• ; whereas, others
• it
• this
• both
• ; however,有文化
• one’s
• plays

Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：

• dictates 决定；主宰
• mother country 祖国
• plays an integral role in 起着不可或缺的作用
• cultural personality 文化性格

- (2) Body 1 -

Aspects that must be视频 referred to 这段需要提到：

• little influence, as new cultural norms are adapted too

One of the main reasons why some believe one’s country of birth, for those that have emigrated, plays a minimal role in that person’s cultural identity is because it is felt that the adoptive culture exudes a powerful presence in the migrant’s life. This presence manifests itself through the daily interactions the immigrant encounters, through the protocols of behavior the person adopts, and even through the language. Eventually, after a period of adaptation, the person will become assimilated into the new co四个untry in which the migrant resides, and particularly if that person takes on the citizenship of that country, will become culturally similar with those born in that country.

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：

• One of the main reasons why some believe…is because 一部分人相信……，是因为

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：

• country of birth 来源国
• emigrated 移民；移居外国
• plays a minimal role in 微乎其微
• cultural identity 文化身份
• adoptive 领养的；收养的；第二的
• exudes a powerful presence in 很有存在感；无处不在
• migrant 移民
• manifests 放大；展现
• daily interactions 日常交流
• the protocols of 礼仪；(行为)准则
• adaptation 适应
• assimilated into 被同化
• resides 居住
• takes on 取得

Words Showing Cohes四个ion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

• one’s
• , for those that
• that
• is because
• it
• the
• This
• through
• , and even through
• Eventually,
• after a period of
• will become
• in which
• , and particularly if that
• with those

- (3) Body 2 -

Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到：

• cultural core of mother country, extremely difficult to adapt to fully assimilate

On the other hand, even in countries that have robust ‘melting pot’ policies, such as the United States, acting as a magnet for people from all over the world, the immigrant may find it extremely difficult to re-socialize themselves by taking on the cultural norms of their newly adopted country. Though the second generation born into their parent’s adoptive country may assimilate easily, the parents, no matter how long they may have lived in the country of their naturalization, will tend to be largely influenced by the culture of their origin. This cultural residue from the original culture may diminish over time, nevertheless, the person’s cultural core will most likely remain unchanged.

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：

• On the other hand, the 在另外一方面，

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：

• robust 强劲的
• ‘melting pot’ 大熔炉
• acting as a magnet for 吸引……的一种磁力
• re-socialize 再社会化
• taking on the cultural norms 文化规范；文化标准
• newly adopted 标准country 移居国
• naturalization 归化
• be largely influenced by 对……有重要影响
• culture of __ origin 源文化
• residue 居住
• diminish over time 随着时间逐渐减弱
• cultural core 文化核心
• remain unchanged 保持不变；依然如故

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

• On the other hand,
• even
• , such as
• , acting as
• , the
• it
• themselves
• their
• Though
• no matter
• they
• This
• , nevertheless
• 
  

- (4) Conclusion -

In conclusion, despite that the act of naturalizing into a new country may, over time, increasingly acculturate an immigrant, it seems clear to me that the cultural heart of a person inherited from their country of origin will remain significant, defining that person’s cultural personality long after they have adopted a new country of residence.

Stan的dard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：

• In conclusion, despite 总而言之，尽管……
• , it seems clear to me that 对我来说，……是显而易见的

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：

• act of naturalizing into 归化
• acculturate 融入新的文化；文化适应
• the cultural heart of 文化核心
• remain significant 依然显著
• long after 很久之后
• country of residence 居住国

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：

• despite
• , over time
• , it
• that
• their
• , defining that
• long after
• they

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