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My parents decided to take me on a trip to Phuket island in Thailand. I was so excited about it. After the three hours fly, we first went to see the grand temple. It was big but quiet because of the existence of the statue of god. Riding on an elephant sounds strange, but it was really fun. Over the next few days, we tasted lots of seafood and local snacks. I hope I will visit it again in the future.
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My parents decided to take me on a trip to Phuket island in Thailand. I was so excited about it. After flying for three hours,we arrived in Phuket island.As soon as we got out of the airport, we went to visit the grand temple first. There is a statue of god in it. All the people kept quiet to show their respect to the god. After that,we went to ride elephants.It sounds strange but it was really fun. You can enjoy more different views on the elephant than on foot. Over the next few days, we tasted lots of seafood and local snacks. They were fresh and delicious. I hope I will visit it again in the future.
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